8.11.08

γη

Earth,
Cool and dry, passive and rigid,
A principle of structure and materialization,
You see locked doors?
Captured by steeping, unswerving, uninterrupted walls?
Spread your wings, fly ahead.
Buried and weighed down by the travesties?
Deep underground?
Reach out, glide on, find a way up.
The rocks- they pray, silent and still.
Will you build my altar in the fields?
With the sky as my dome...
and the world at my feet!

PS- This a rather random Kreation that I wrote while commenting on one of the blogs that I religiously follow. 
(this blog here)

PS2- The title -  γη - is "Earth" in Greek.


9 comments:

Abhijeet !! who else ? said...

Hmm...
Mother Earth : 3rd Planet from the Sun.
You wont get wings any other place in the entire Universe

Arjun said...

Very nice....

I mean, nice imagination, impressively penned down.... :)

Came across ur blog randomly... U got a nice place here...

Cheers..!!
Arjun

Kriti said...

@ Arjunb

Thank you for dropping by.

Keep blogging
Cheers!

Comfortably Numb said...

I'm blushing and smiling ear to ear. For obvious reasons. Thanks a LOT. I just finished replying to your comment on my blog...and wish granted :P

Cheers!!

rebel_on_loose said...

You have a definite flair for creativity...keep it up !

Nice blog, by the way ...

Kriti said...

@ Comfortably Numb

Your welcome! Cheers!


@
C R D

Thanks..

@ rebel on loose

Thank you....

zo said...

nice blog .. nice writing!hey! cant seem to find any sharing engine on ur blog. y dnt u put up something like Tell-a-Friend so that visitor like me can easily share ur posts with frens thru mails,IMs,blogs,socialnetworking sites etc...u cn simply register on www.socialtwist.com Do check it out :)

Kriti said...

@
Zoran.

Thanks for visiting..
I never knew anything abut this 'tell-a-friend' thing... now dat uve mentioned.. ill take care and put it up.

zo said...

thnks Creation, it's my pleasure :) be careful with the site type u choose ...c ya!!