3.11.08

To my friends... "Divine Interventions"

This untitled poem goes out to all my friends (and specifically, to one person who will figure out that this refers to him/her... so no need to mention the name!) who have been  with me through thick and thin.
Cheers to F.R.I.E.N.D.S.H.I.P.
I wish I could cry and let it all out,
But somehow, the tears have deserted me too,
And, as I sit here, silent, introspecting,
All I think of is you!

You came into my life when the world seemed blunt,
And brought with you a new verve,
And just when I had thought that all was over,
My life took a sharp swerve.

You infused in me a new confidence,
Made life worthwhile,
For you brought joy and happiness with you,
And taught me how to smile.

And now as I write this poem,
I think I’d show it to you,
For I feel God brought you to me,
Coz he knew I needed you.




May God bless you all, just as he blessed me with you.


P.S.- the poem is not untitled anymore. It is called "Divine Interventions". Much thanks to A!

PS2: Another very good friend and a fellow blogger recently pointed out that one of his posts was titled "Divine Interventions" as well... and since his name starts with an 'A', he is planning to sue me! (lol! naah.. he's a sweet soul.. m just kidding..). But yes, jokes apart, the credit goes to him- Here's a link to his post- Divine Interventions

23 comments:

Anonymous said...

Such a nice poem.....Makes as realise the importance of frndship. Not to take them for granted.

Creation said...

@ anonymous

thank you for dropping by, I would been obliged if you had mentioned your name though...

Creation said...

Heyy Amps.. thats you.. right?

Prakhar said...

luvly poem...
**For I feel God brought you to me,
Coz he knew I needed you.**

nice thought!

Creation said...

@ Prakhar

Thnx
:)

C R D said...

very nice poem yaar..i bet each of ur frnds who reads this wud wish that this one was written for them (like i am right now:P)

cheers

Creation said...

@ CRD

oh! But it is! It IS written for you!

:)

Anonymous said...

YS KRITS, who else will spell US wrong HMM :)

Creation said...

lol.. i knowww!!!

Gee! i love you! :D

Scribblers Inc said...

nice words...the title is great!! :D

Scribblers Inc.

Creation said...

@ Scribblers

Thank you!
And the credit for the title goes to..

*trumpets*

A!

Sorry, was just feeling cheeky!
Thanks for visiting!

chintu said...

Well... Look at this girl
Aint got no love for diamond N pearl
Drop down straight from the Nemesis Sky
Wired thoughts she got you may say, intact they R High

Just look at her Eyes, saying as it Cry
‘You only live until U die”

Seems no one understands Her
Make a wish; pray take a chance for Her.

I too feel blessed
Cause I among her fiends, who R sacred n Few
“For I fell God brought you to me,
Coz He knew I Needed You.

Thanks for your ‘Divine Interventions’

Abhijeet…

chintu said...

Well... Look at this girl
Aint got no love for diamond N pearl
Drop down straight from the Nemesis Sky
Wired thoughts she got you may say, intact they R High

Just look at her Eyes, saying as it Cry
‘You only live until U die”

Seems no one understands Her
Make a wish; pray take a chance for Her.

I too feel blessed
Cause I among her fiends, who R sacred n Few
“For I fell God brought you to me,
Coz He knew I Needed You.

Thanks for your ‘Divine Interventions’

Abhijeet…

chintu said...

Well... Look at this girl
Aint got no love for diamond N pearl
Drop down straight from the Nemesis Sky
Wired thoughts she got you may say, intact they R High

Just look at her Eyes, saying as it Cry
‘You only live until U die”

Seems no one understands Her
Make a wish; pray take a chance for Her.

I too feel blessed
Cause I among her fiends, who R sacred n Few
“For I fell God brought you to me,
Coz He knew I Needed You.

Thanks for your ‘Divine Interventions’

Abhijeet…

Creation said...

@ Abhijeet/ chintu

Woah!!

The rhyme.. as good as it gets!
I should've been the one thanking you for your "Divine Interventions"...

btw.. what's with the nickname? :P

Bluebutterfly said...

wow.... that was really great....
I wish I had a frnd to write poems about me ya....
thats really sweet of u....

Creation said...

@ bluebutterfly

dont worry re..
you have a right to this poem! :)

shash said...

Very sweetly written..the way it ends is fab!
mind if i save it? with credits to u of cos..lest its copyrighted!

Creation said...

@ Shash

Yes! You can save it. Just rememeber to crdit me! :)

Thank you!

shash said...

Thank you too!
:-)

Aupsy-The cOOlest One!! said...

i dont care who this poem is addressed to ,i'm definitely taking credit for ur title even if u dont give it to me :P

so the next tym we meet, i'll put a swiss knife across ur neck and take the copyrights of atleast the title with me, and yeah, m not too wrong in claiming something that's mine...

and again...i'll make sure this poem is written for none other than me...

stop protesting... the swiss knife is quite new and sharp ;)

Creation said...

@ Ayush....

Oh! Take all credits.. It wont matter.. even I don't have the credits of this poem myself!
lol.

Kartz said...

That was a touching dedication; beautifully penned. Friends are such a treasure. Cannot imagine a life without them, can we...

Peace.
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"Life brings no joy like you- friend.
Faith, fulfillment and prophecy, blend
In the throb of a heart with it's own,
A heart so familiar, where we are known."

http://kartzonline.blogspot.com/2008/05/ode-to-you-friend.html

One I wrote not too long ago...
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