24.9.07

The Beginning And End Of.....




The day I met him, touched him;
Felt him inside my head all the time,
I knew as soon as I saw that angel,
That he were meant to be just mine!


Those brown, dancing eyes;
A fire glowed in them,
Their gaze so intense,
It just left me overwhelmed!


That dark, shiny hair;
An unkempt mess of curls,
Oh! How I wished to run my hand through them,
And let the mystery unfurl!


Those red, luscious lips;
A full bloomed rose they resembled,
I only dreamt to kiss them,
But when I tried I trembled!


That powerful yet sweet baritone;
When he spoke he seemed to sing,
And so mesmerizing it would be,
The rest of the world would reduce to nothing!

That cute, infecting smile;
That he would bestow on me so sheepishly,
I’d be lost in its magic,
Instantly reaching out to him so foolishly!


That robust, muscular body;
Any girl would want to embrace,
A hint of that strange musky smell…
NOW ALL SEEMS SO OUT OF PLACE!!


YES! He was in love with someone else,
And I just couldn’t see,
So blind I was in his love that,
The truth seemed too far from me!


So depressed, so hollow, so sad,
So blue, so dejected, so lost;
I had just let go of the person
I had loved the most!

The last thing I know,
I stood in front of the mirror,
A single tear rolled down my right cheek,
As I pulled the trigger!







10 comments:

ASHISH said...

gr888 kri
awesome

creation chaos said...

hmm.. dat was expected since its cumin from u.. tum kabhi meri burayi karbhi sakte ho???

ASHISH said...
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J said...

well am speechless...

especially knowing my orientations, I need not say that I loved it....lol

on a srs note, kind of liked the description of a girl's dream guy. Though, mind you, you are aiming too high.....can't think of anyone but me fulfilling all the criteria.

creation s said...

hehehe.. u kno very well who fills the criteria..

i jst hope the last 3 paras never come tru..

tho wat i write .. has a tendency to do just xactly da..
has hpnd with me 4 times in the past..
wat i wrote.. came tru.. so. i was rlly scared wen this one got completed..

Aupsy-The cOOlest One!! said...

hehe....gud one yaar...esp the twist in d end,caught me off guard...thought it'd be like any other poem by a girl who's fantasizing about her dream guy...but it did turn out to be more creative than that!!! :)

creation s said...

dats how it started off..
a girl fantasisng bout his dream guy..
but then.. i got bored by all the mushy- mushy talk.. n thot..
bas!! bahut ho gaya!!
let it end!!
hehe..
i get fed up of such things very easily!!

ShantanuDas said...

Awww na nanaa na Do not pull that trigger... there are always second best available around you.....

:-)

Creation said...

Haha.

Who cares for guys.. they're all the same... I wrote this one as achallenge.. a very good friend of mine said i can't write 'romantic' stuff.. so i started with that..
but then of course i got bored and killed the girl.. :P

ShantanuDas said...

HAHA! acchha kya!!!!

Hey this is same Kriti who was dying to apologise to her friend??