29.9.08

Filthy F**kin' Bastard!

Blotches of red on the white marble,

A pool of red at my feet,

My hand boasts of 23 cuts,

(some of them need stitches mind you),

No easy feat!

But hatred that wells within me,

A loathing so deep embedded,

It will echo in your heart and soul,

Long after I am dead.

You won't feel guilty,

You filthy f**kin' bastard

May you rot in hell,

And if alive, be cursed!

You know not what you did to me,

Why the hell would you care?

After all, you got it... didn't you?

You've had your 'share'!

Mark my words,

For they will bloom,

Justice shall be done,

And your entire kind is doomed!

12 comments:

Prianca said...

whoaaa
kya aggression tha.........
waise, nice attempt
nd temme, temme
yeh impromptu kreation thi,
ya phir this aggression is directed at specific someone....? ;)

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do check it out

Aupsy-The cOOlest One!! said...

whoa....itna gussa kispe nikal raha hai????

Kriti said...

@ prianca...

of course it is directed at someone.. i mean each and every word!!

@ Ayush..

raha?
i am a female.. forgotten?
and.. whomsoever this aggression is directed at.. well.. he may rot in heaven.. thats all i have to say!

Anonymous said...

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The Wanderer said...

oye.. gussa thook de... paani pi!! lolz..
kisne jurrat ki itnaaaa irritate karne ke?

Kriti said...

@ abhishek..
as i always say.. love aint the most powerful emotion.. hatred is..

@ nishi
ive answered this one before..
whoever it was.. may he rot in hell!

Unknown said...

ab samajh aayii.....

Kriti said...

chalo.. shukr hai..
aftr spending 15 mins trying to xplain it to u..
uuff.. gullu!!

CRD said...

ahem ahem...itna gussa??

did someone cheat on u?

Kriti said...

umm... not exactly...

somewhere close though..

Roshan said...

quite straight forward from the heart, aint it?
Good to get the anger into words.
abt the 23 cuts...its too melodramatic..filmi ishtyle...women of today are stronger than that.

Nice Blog. chanced on it through indiblogger.
Keep it up.

Kriti said...

@ Roshan

Thanks for dropping by...

And the 23 cuts.. are true..

and.. as a confirmation.. i am outting up the picture in this post that I had earlier refrained to put up..